Wednesday, 2 July 2008

Lunch with our Monster "IT"

We have been learning to use lots of different describing words in our writing.

Today we wrote poems that described the food we would eat if we went out to lunch with our monster "It". Here are some lines from Room 9's poems.

If I had lunch with It...
We would start out with white and orange fish pie. (Holly)
Then he would serve me a stinky, red meat pie. (Baxter)
And a cup of fat,chocolate worms. (Chloe)
Next we will eat rainbow goo. (Keely)
For desert, I would eat crimson, slushy pavlova (Logan)
And green, slimy slugs (Quanah)
with a monster sized apple (Tony)

Here are four of our best monster pictures... what do you think?

By Melany

By Logan

By Arjuna & Toby


Miss Thomas said...

I am very scared of monsters now I have seen your pictures! I hope I don't have nightmares...
I think you have used some excellent descriptive adjectives in your writing - I can see what the food looks like from your description. I am not sure I would want to eat it though!!
Miss Thomas
Room 23
Meadowbank School

judy said...

EEEEEWWWWW!!!!!! I would so not want to have that menu in front of me or have to eat anything like that! Great imagination guys, wonderful use of adjectives. I guess checking out this menu won't be going on your itinerary for Grandma!!!!! (from Judy - Hayden's mum)